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Ultrakill poem — Machine, Looking for critiques!
Kawaiifoxfan @kawaiifoxfan
Haii cuties~ So, I wrote this Ultrakill poem called 'Machine'—check it out! It’s all about that wild V1 energy, y’know? Here it is:
It’s drawn to Essence, pure, divine,
A sacred force machines can’t claim.
Is this a god, or twisted shame,
What broke a nation’s grand design?
The things we forged, unyielding steel,
Machines from fire’s heart were shaped.
The Federation’s dream escaped—
A tool unbound by what we feel.
No gods, no peace, just war it knows,
A soulless might that never bends.
Where angels quake, the demon rends,
And hell’s abyss forever grows.
Perhaps the divine’s not in breath,
But in the power death unfurls.
The essence bleeds with every fall—
Not mercy’s cry, nor fleeting thrill.
It burns as fuel, a ceaseless need,
To load, to kill, to march ahead.
No rest, no grace, just hunger fed—
A machine’s cold and endless creed.
Ok, so I’m like, super into Sword Art Online and Akame ga Kill! vibes, and I wanted it to feel dark but cool—like hell’s all chaos and no chill! What do u think? Did I nail that Ultrakill mood or nah? Be nice but real with me, hehe~ Dying to hear ur thoughts, cuties! ;) xoxo <3
Mar 25, 25 at 4:20am
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Mar 19, 25 at 11:26pm
Honestly of the two I am not sure who I dislike more. Gluttony or Lust.
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Mar 19, 25 at 4:12pm
Sounds like you two need to have a serious talk, if you haven't already.
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Mar 18, 25 at 6:17pm
Og voice actors
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Mar 18, 25 at 9:55pm
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Mar 18, 25 at 2:49pm
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Mar 16, 25 at 2:51pm
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Mar 16, 25 at 9:48am
I just know Piccadilly shut down years ago in my area. I believe there is maybe one left in Newport News. But that's far from where I live.
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Mar 15, 25 at 4:43pm
I'm hijacking yet another dead thread to pose a question befitting the title.
I was having a talk with a coworker and was curious to know what y'all thought about this.
Should it be legal for a company to partner with another company and then dictate said other company's pay and benefits as well as work schedules, but not be legally responsible for said employees on account they work for the other company therefore it isn't the 1st company's responsibility to make sure said other company pays its staff or take responsibility for any wrong doing the partner does?
The partner company must also exclusively do contracts for the primary company and use primary company's assets to perform that job. However all legal repercussions are exclusively the secondary company's fault. The primary being exempt from all wrong doing.
Does that make sense? Does that sound like it should be legal to do?