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Crave To Kill

seeingcrimson17
She walked down in the dark alley and through the corridors, whilst her grip tighten against her hold of the sharp metal object. Her smirk grew into a menacing smile, her adrenaline rushea through her blood as her vision became a haze. The path was spinning around and it felt as if her eyebwalls wanted to explode. She searched everywhere for her beloved, but her rivals kept him safe. Safe from her. The thought fueled her incredulously thinking of what they'd do against him. It wasn't blissful since she worries about him all the time. Then, few !minutes later, she came to an abrupt stop at a certain door. Blood, trickling down her wrists to her amrs oozing with poure crimsom. She kicked the door open only to find her beloved in a position she had feared and envied. She charged at the girl who was towering upon her beloved, aimed her kmofe and immensely stabbed her behind the back, through her heart; blood seeped through her white shirt, staining it with the colour she had adored. "Are you alright, James?" She questioned as her face softened, her smile glistening brightly and innocently. "Y-Yes," he shakoly replied whilst getting up on his feet. He stared at the girl on the floor, who was now lying in a pool of blood. He averted his gaze and kept quiet, trying to avoid to anger his yandere girl friend. "Are we going to leave her there?" He questioned whilew scratching the va k of his neck, gazes fixated at each other. She smiled as her gaze lowered, then spoke raspily, "I'll take care of the body, my beloved," Okay I know its shit but I based this off of my imagination xD
rikkuasahina
This is scary but I really like it! ^__^
seeingcrimson17
Thanks 030 I re read this shitty paragraph and noticed typos! Typos are very evil xD
soulxiii
Oct 16, 15 at 8:01am
not bad
seeingcrimson17
thanks, sorry for the typos tho
soulxiii
Oct 16, 15 at 3:01pm
it's not a big deal (⌒▽⌒)☆
superluxus
Oct 17, 15 at 7:47pm
Hahaha, kind of dark and bleak. But still cool, you're not planning to do this are you? Jk,jk. Very well done - and there is an edit button where you can go back and edit what you wrote. Just a thought for future reference.
seeingcrimson17
No. Unless it is necessary XD
arc
Arc @arc commented on Crave To Kill
Oct 19, 15 at 6:40pm
Ahahaha...hahaha... ^_^; You're writing skills are amazing for your age, yet very unsettling. P-Please don't kill me o.o
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