Critique #1

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/tN3SCVe.jpg?1[/IMG] [OC - Dark Akuma] Did this a while back, your input is valuable

I think it's really awesome, you should try making your shading in the boots smother and some and add some white marks to make it look like shine.

I think that this is awesome! The only thing is I don't think the eyes are scary enough...if scary is what you're going for.

he's a f'd up character, with almost but distant traits from Deadpool, he looks innocent but he's a devil haha. He's a major Antagonist for the story he's in. also thanks

hmm I think you should do more just one shade, like go pitch black somewhere go light grey on some other areas, also you should pay attention on your contouring, more contour on the main character and less on the background that way its a bit more ...you know a bit completed

it looks pritty decent three things that you really need to practice is under structure of the character youve got decent line usuage and an eye for line wait (high five on that my line weight is crap) good under structure will help your character feel more rounded like the super nice animes you see (ex: ghost in a shell,dragon ball etc) good solid under structure will also help your character feel like it has more "weight" to it meaning it will really feel like he solidly planted on the ground. the second thing i would recommend working on is fore shortening of your limbs such as the legs your proportions are slightly off even with the fore shortening but over all it really isnt that bad just a little rough. the last thing i would say is to really watch how cloth will fall on the character a good way to figure this out is to put on a jacket and take a picture of your self in the mirror or have some one take a picture of you watch how the cloths crinckle and move with your body even sitting dont try to draw wevery single fold intead simplify it by drawing only the ones that really make it show what the cloth is doing it takes a lot of practice but trust me its sooooo worth it when you finally start to get it! other than that great job! and keep drawing! you got an eye for this