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redhawk
Oct 21, 14 at 2:59am
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/tN3SCVe.jpg?1[/IMG] [OC - Dark Akuma] Did this a while back, your input is valuable
neoheart
Oct 21, 14 at 9:03am
I think it's really awesome, you should try making your shading in the boots smother and some and add some white marks to make it look like shine.
redhawk
Oct 21, 14 at 1:30pm
yea I agree man, thanks. However I'm not good at adding the shine haha.
elizan
Oct 21, 14 at 1:35pm
I think that this is awesome! The only thing is I don't think the eyes are scary enough...if scary is what you're going for.
redhawk
Oct 21, 14 at 1:41pm
he's a f'd up character, with almost but distant traits from Deadpool, he looks innocent but he's a devil haha. He's a major Antagonist for the story he's in. also thanks
aiisholuv
Oct 21, 14 at 2:26pm
I would love to see more
redhawk
Oct 21, 14 at 2:28pm
thanks I do have another one under Critique #2
tadaningen
Nov 14, 14 at 9:57pm
hmm I think you should do more just one shade, like go pitch black somewhere go light grey on some other areas, also you should pay attention on your contouring, more contour on the main character and less on the background that way its a bit more ...you know a bit completed
redhawk
Jan 28, 15 at 4:13pm
Late reply but thanks
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