nanael

My problem is having too much plot, too much backstory, and far too many explanations in my story. I've writen 100 pages and i haven't reached the "disaster" that starts the story yet :P I fear readers would get bored, but even with 100 pages the story is still too packed, soo many things happening at the same time that i have no idea how to deal with them. In 1 banquet i must introduce about 15 characters, and they are ALL important for the story and MUST be there :P And that's just part of the plot... If i continue the story this way, it'll have above 8.000 pages, being optimistic

You can find the whole novel ( including chapters that haven't been published yet ) in japanense, but nobody is translating it anymore :/