ahhh, okay I see, lots of people point this out to me. there is lots of character development, especially for Ken since he is different from everyone else on Earth and Terra.

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Jul 01, 13 at 4:09pm

ah I see, can you give me other examples of popular POV? 1a. On Terra it is the Age of Swords and Magic, but it would be an advanced place without any technology. While Earth it is the present, but with a little futuristic twist. And yes I am having problems presenting it, but once I'm passed that stage I'm golden lol

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Jul 01, 13 at 2:51pm

sorry I had to split this into different parts, wouldnt let me put it all together

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Jul 01, 13 at 2:49pm

5a. give me an example of thirdstory viewpoint used in a manga, since I dont really pay attention too much to it and just read. But I know that It first begins with Ken and how his life is dull, then shifts over to Terra I hope this helps, and dont worry if you thought you were being harsh, I welcome anyones opinions whether they are Good or Bad, because it helps me fix some errors I have and motivates me even more. I have shared this Manga Idea with users on this site and they like it, just you and someone else gave me a critics review lol. Thanks man