Have the character spend time with the crush, as the more their relationship develops, the more that the character will want to keep that relationship growing, even if it means to cut down anything that would stub the relationship. And that is how you create a yandere in both writing and in real life (trust me, my ex was one, luckily she was the one who dumped me, otherwise I don't know what would have happened...).

A monitor? Anyway, try this one on. What is sad, misunderstood, and is stuck with trying to help us reach our goal? Constantly misrepresented as something sinister and cold, When all it wants is someone to call friend, Ever holding the flickering torch of life in our last moments, As we drift from its hands and leave it without solace for its own journey? Here is a hint if that wasn't enough, All will see it, whether it is there for you or not, But know that it will only be there once, And that is at the beginning and end to your journey. You may have thought you saw it in times of danger, You may have thought you saw it in a bad dream, You may have even thought that it had its hand around your neck, But that is wrong, For it was merely holding your hand as it protected you. This one should be obvious.

A psychological horror about someone with psychosis (think of it like daydreaming, but you can't control it, and a lot of the time it is violent, trust me, I used to have it).

You and me both Loli_Vampire. I am also writing a story that I hope to turn into a manga, but so far due to my inability to draw anything that isn't realistic I am stuck with doing novels until I can find an artist willing to do it. Only difference is mine is about a mental and physical war between a man and his id (the part of the mind that represents evil and primal thought) and how it eventually leads to him attempting a world-wide dictatorship for the sake of peace.

I suggest adding something other than backstory to make the story tragic, maybe an after story showing Athena trying to cope with the absence of Nicholas and taking it somewhere dark. Most good tragedies ended tragically.

I have a lot of issues with writing it, especially since I try to keep things as canon as possible for the very small chance that the original sees it and decides to make it canon. (Which is why I haven't finished my Tokyo Ghoul fanfic.)

ill be going for my 2nd year in a row except the full 3 days and cosplaying as someone and definitely spending a thousand bucks on my waifu luka

I guess I'm included. Captain Falcon from F-ZERO franchise was a cross between him and Max Rockatansky from Mad Max series. From his punches and kicks to his vehicle being another "Falcon" vehicle. And Segata Sanshiro actor is Kamen Rider 1st: http://youtu.be/ge_GUxaxDgs

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