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sapphireyes @sapphireyes started Ok let me try this again

Nov 11, 12 at 8:22pm

So I few days ago i was having issues posting a poem. I'm guess it had too many words or something so I'm trying to post it again it will be in parts sadly but it's all one thing. Ok here it is

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sapphireyes @sapphireyes

Nov 11, 12 at 8:23pm

took it down

sapphireyes @sapphireyes commented on Ok let me try this again

sapphireyes @sapphireyes

Nov 11, 12 at 8:23pm

took it down

sapphireyes @sapphireyes commented on Ok let me try this again

sapphireyes @sapphireyes

Nov 11, 12 at 8:25pm

And their we have it. That's the poem and it wasn't to hard to break up so that's good hope you enjoyed it :)

kirai_meiun @kirai_meiun commented on Ok let me try this again

kirai_meiun @kirai_meiun

Nov 11, 12 at 8:48pm

I love it T-T. So good. nice work sappie poo

Lamby @momoichi commented on Ok let me try this again

Lamby @momoichi

Nov 13, 12 at 12:31am

yay u took my advice >:D! now ur on the angler fish side >:D but anywheez good poem :D

Yu @metaljester commented on Ok let me try this again

Yu @metaljester

Nov 13, 12 at 12:33am

Very good poem i did enjoy it sigh need to make mine better but im more into drama and action fanfics i do a share of romance fanfics

sapphireyes @sapphireyes commented on Ok let me try this again

sapphireyes @sapphireyes

Nov 13, 12 at 11:20am

Thank you ^w^

Yu @metaljester commented on Ok let me try this again

Yu @metaljester

Nov 13, 12 at 11:22am

Welcome sapphire anytime you need my advice tell me

sapphireyes @sapphireyes commented on Ok let me try this again

sapphireyes @sapphireyes

Nov 13, 12 at 11:28am

On writing I think I'm good. But thanks anyway

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