Starting a conversation

Ok I'm gonna be honest, I skimmed the 18 pages mainly because I'm at work, but he seems really overloaded. Also is the health section asking him? Or you? Because it jumps perspective on it.

just read the docs, I have a litany of questions now @_@ Save that for later

I'm just gonna say you should simplify him a little without really elaborating. He just looks like he's got too much going on. It's an interesting start though.

I understand that as I always have a character that goes with my personality and off the top of my head this character literally has my personality on the. Where he is literally my inner self. He's meant to be a zombie who is also human and also a demon.

and I'm sorry about that because the fact that I am connected with this character somewhat and it's hard for me to go from the first person to third person it sometimes happens. It's like when you get committed to a character and you have that problem of getting attached.

He will have to eat human flesh even if he does not want to it will start becoming more and more of a habit kind of like Tokyo Ghoul kaneki Ken where he has to eat flesh if he's not drinking coffee. Daiji we'll have cravings and he will be searching for someone that could make the pills.

He has moments where he can't control his anger especially when he is feeling betrayed or somebody turn their back on him.