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I am created a manga and I am drawing out the character's. I have three step process of drawing the character's. This is first step were I analyse the character and see which part needs improvements. I want you to help me which part I need to improve more. Please give me feed back. Thanks

you have a good base, good structure so id say you just need to polish now and work on shading and clothing wrinkle

Lamby Thanks! This is my main character I am drawing. I have post another pic of this in a different postions in a second step of drawing my characters. It's in my pictures in my profile.