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Artemis the goddess of my nightmares

combatvoss
You are passionate and strong You know where your heart belongs Your virtue Your kindness You are a protector a hunter To decry any less would just be too wrong As a child you had courage A will stronger than steel Apollo himself sees you a sibling You've won the hearts of so many Yet yours cannot be revealed It's a pain really how that makes me feel Even an Adonis cannot boast himself to you And a man who makes attempt to steal your purity shall find his manhood removed And his light dashed so very far For you are a virgin goddess And anyone who catches your heart finds themselves among the stars I can never love a woman like you who rebukes any advance spurns affection honors chastity insists on dominance and attempts the life of any man who would see her an equal I cannot love you Artemis For you are a Goddess And I seek a partner to love Not a superior to worship
sherflow
Is this a poem about criticising religion or about the futility of chasing a girl out of your league? Actually it could literally just be about the Greek goddess Artemis. Funny thing about literature, the meaning is in the eye of the beholder. It was very nice poem and well constructed, I like it. Well done.
burninghalo
I swear that was on purpose
combatvoss
I'm glad you both enjoyed it
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