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Zenokun @zenokun
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Zenokun @zenokun
Darkness descends,
Chaos rises,
Overall tyranny around.
Abandoned homes,
Bloodied streets,
Naught but a sound.
Pounding hearts,
Fearful minds,
Angels aren’t aware,
Of just how black,
And just how blue --
Their little world isn’t fair.
Wholesome laughter,
Cheerful glee,
A tiny shred of bliss,
Forewarning denied,
Stripped away,
Their parents’ final kiss.
Kill their fathers,
Rape their mothers,
Orphaned -- left alone,
With ceased laughter,
Lingering thoughts,
“For what sin have I to atone?”
Sunken hearts,
Aimless travels,
A descent into a slippery slope,
Heavy hearts,
All alone,
Not a scrap of hope.
Darkness descends,
Chaos rises,
Overall tyranny around,
Angels fall,
Their fragile wings clipped,
With naught but a sound.

Usagi Eri @lordelricsama
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Usagi Eri @lordelricsama
I feel as if I went to war... and lost everything. Other then that great work!

pocketto @pocketto
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pocketto @pocketto
I enjoyed reading this one. Well done.

nintendo_werewolf @nintendo_werewolf
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nintendo_werewolf @nintendo_werewolf
Nicely written, I write poetry myself, if you ever want to share, if you write more.

Zenokun @zenokun
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Zenokun @zenokun
Thanks, everyone! :o
@Nintendo: I'd love to read some of your work. :)

nintendo_werewolf @nintendo_werewolf
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nintendo_werewolf @nintendo_werewolf
Here's one of my poems
Hello again mirror
I see someone in your reflection
but it ain't me
blood drips from your corners
to show your just as terrified
as I am
Cause their smiling at me
and I don't know what
their gonna do
I don't know how long it's been
since my last confession
Sometimes my sanity slips, sometimes it gets bloody,
sometimes I don't wanna talk about
what happens when I slip.
Hello again mirror
You bitch looking like me
It's been a thousand farewells an
not a moment's forgiveness
Since I've said this is who I am
would you please be my friend
I do my best to not carve
myself apart
but it's hard to swallow rejection
when god's not answering
Mirror, mirror
on the wall before my face
how's it going?
there's someone in your reflection
but it ain't me
an I guess that's how it's gonna be
cause I have no regrets
for who I'm seeing

Zenokun @zenokun
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Zenokun @zenokun
What an aesthetically pleasant read!

stranger @stranger
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stranger @stranger
beautiful pieces both of you!
i feel that there is a certain pain conveyed..
is the "speaker" also the author? cause thats tough, strong emotions.. :0

nintendo_werewolf @nintendo_werewolf
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nintendo_werewolf @nintendo_werewolf
Whose that last question to me or zenokun
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