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Arsonist (A short poem)

mitruki_1
Watching in awe, Buildings burning, Hearing the cries Of people yearning To retrieve the things, They once held dear, Oblivious to My ominous sneer. The Fire burns down; Finishing its reaping Of the poor souls that it Felt like sweeping, Into a bright, And fiery display, Departing and Letting the bodies decay. When the work is done, I return to my dwelling; Plotting and planning The future. Foretelling The fate of those, That deserve the most, To fall victim to a woman With vengeance morose ----------------------------- Well how was it?
mitruki_1
SOMEONE GIVE ME FEEDBACK D:<
vicarious_life
I really like the rhyme between the second and fourth lines against the first and third lines!
mitruki_1
D'awh thanks c:
nero1209
A good poem I liked it, though I think some more poet synergy would be nice like comparing the flames to something like a personality trait. Still a very good poem :)
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