Arsonist (A short poem)
mitruki_1 @mitruki_1
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Arsonist (A short poem)
mitruki_1 @mitruki_1
Watching in awe,
Buildings burning,
Hearing the cries
Of people yearning
To retrieve the things,
They once held dear,
Oblivious to
My ominous sneer.
The Fire burns down;
Finishing its reaping
Of the poor souls that it
Felt like sweeping,
Into a bright,
And fiery display,
Departing and
Letting the bodies decay.
When the work is done,
I return to my dwelling;
Plotting and planning
The future. Foretelling
The fate of those,
That deserve the most,
To fall victim to a woman
With vengeance morose
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Well how was it?
mitruki_1 @mitruki_1
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Arsonist (A short poem)
mitruki_1 @mitruki_1
SOMEONE GIVE ME FEEDBACK D:<
vicarious_life @vicarious_life
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Arsonist (A short poem)
vicarious_life @vicarious_life
I really like the rhyme between the second and fourth lines against the first and third lines!
mitruki_1 @mitruki_1
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Arsonist (A short poem)
mitruki_1 @mitruki_1
D'awh thanks c:
Trelós Dr.Likos @nero1209
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Arsonist (A short poem)
Trelós Dr.Likos @nero1209
A good poem I liked it, though I think some more poet synergy would be nice like comparing the flames to something like a personality trait. Still a very good poem :)
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