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Attention Creative writers I need help with Origin Story

mythalot
OK Origin Time
The topic goddess Animitius, Greek God
Animitius is the God of NEETs
Basically cast spells making u fearful of outside world
Makes u focus your attention to watch anime
main goal to make u a social outcast
Write a Myth these requirements
has to be Original and use things from natural world
Optional can use existing greek gods
Winners get the joy of winning

kaneki_ken
Welcome to the NHK nuff said XD
boundbyluck
Wait if animitius is the god of neets, then doesn't that mean that the god itself is a neet? O.o???
sota
I'm a little bit confused what exactly are you going for here ? and please spell out your words if you are planning to be a writer abbreviations are a nono
otakujt
@Sota has the right idea.
Grammar is the number one rule when writing a story. Unless you're actually aiming to get negativity, grammar is truly what you have to aim for first... that and an actual good plot too. This doesn't seem to have much of either as far as I can tell.
kallsu
But Style is also important and goes hand in hand with Grammar in a way. I'd recommend doing some reading such as Garner's Modern American Usage, this may also help with you figuring out stylehttp://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0205747469/metafilter-20/ref=nosim/ or maybe even this may help youhttp://www.amazon.com/Elements-Style-Illustrated-William-Strunk/dp/0143112724/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1430626783&sr=8-1&keywords=Illustrated+Strunk+and+White
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