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The part of her killing bad ghouls got through fine. You mentioned through Mado and Amon that she killed ghouls in their wanted list. It's just that she seems to know everyone very well, so she's not so mysterious in the story itself. I think maybe having her be familiar with Touka is fine since she's at Anteiku plenty, but maybe have her be standoffish/ wary of Uta (since even in the manga his inter ions aren't fully known), and not really aware of Nishio since he's a weak punk at this point in the manga.

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All in all I thought they were good! The grammar, punctuation and structure were all good. I liked how you write Hide, albeit brief, it really felt like Hide. It was also nice when you mentioned how Touka's gave would change from annoyed to flustered. My one comment about the original character is, who are they? They hate Rize, love Touka, are chill with Uta, and have been around Anteiku plenty, all while being a cannibal (and not going insane when they activate). i know they're the main character of the story, but they're relationship with everyone Is too perfect haha. Also, maybe a bit more description when tasting/smelling things. Aside from that, it was good :) keep it up and send me more when they're done!

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