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darkmajindrew
Our Grasp this endless horizon stretching past the point of this universe to the next yet this area is so large one can still feel the grip of loneliness no matter how large this zone becomes the empty space still covers it the most this vast void of empty space leaves nothing but a lonely mind thankfully this place is littered with dazzling lights after all this is our world our home is nearly a speck of dust spinning around a larger speck of dust we look up and see nothing but a sad a and lonely sky and a question where is the rest this can't be all there is this very thought inspires the mind the mind makes its own worlds is this a curse or a dream we can't not see so therefore me make maybe just forget everything is so far away from our grasp.
moose_of_mibu
White Flowers: My head hurts with the thought Where it came from I know not -With these flowers where you lie I couldn't even say goodbye Petals of white came down with rain As it poured, so did my pain And I denied it until now... Got to conquer this-but I don't know how Where these thorns of white die and grow You'll rest with me-forever so! In my heart of hearts you will remain As it poured, so did my pain When you died-so did I Now my soul remains where these white flowers lie... Sorry to leave you--I want to see the world These Autumn leaves crunch under my feet Breathing-burdensome down the street With a white flower pressed against my hand The answer to my problems is just ahead And i'll struggle-relentless in this troubled land Until I come to understand- -This motivation pushing me forward It's my life Im heading toward Today is where I say goodbye To my best friend where these white flowers lie I leave these white flowers by your side One day I swear you'll wear them with pride My imagination is no longer held down by your death I will make your name known with my every breath!
dragonrage
Jul 16, 14 at 3:34pm
Loved You Like summer's cool rain Happy thoughts show in my brain Loved you like the simple joys Loved you like rain's noise Flowing as the breeze on my face Glazing at the twinkling in space Loved you like the simple life Loved you happy and away from strife Though love was past tense Nothing compares to you from here hence
animekid
Jul 16, 14 at 9:13pm
Darkness We all have darkness we try to hide Darkness that’s hidden deep down inside We do our best to hide from one another We do our best to try and smother But it gets free, it never stays It spreads to others to our dismay But in the end light will fight dark’s might And we will see who wins this morrow’s night
moose_of_mibu
The Ocean The salt of the sea, stinging me endlessly Flowing from the serene, everything that can be seen Like my strong will, all was still, until this somber truth I found Echoes crashed, clashed with violent waves of sound The image it forms, created by manic storms Washed up on the shore, just like every time before A cast in the sand, molded by your hand I dig into the form before it sets I claw and I cut into all its regrets Until all is dissolved into grains, until nothing remains Lost in one dream, like reality it slowly seems Drowning in this, there is no bliss A one-sided devotion; You are like the ocean A distant, cold and frigid view -Can only be a single shade of blue For I can never have you...
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yaasshat
Jul 21, 14 at 8:42am
The only criticism is this, make sure that youre not saying these things too soon. Its rather heavy in intention, other wise best of luck. Personally, i wouldnt ask another if my words should change, let your words come from you even if sappy.
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yaasshat
Jul 21, 14 at 12:03pm
Glad to hear.:)
animekid
Jan 18, 16 at 8:44pm
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