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darkmajindrew @darkmajindrew
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darkmajindrew @darkmajindrew
Our Grasp
this endless horizon stretching past
the point of this universe to the next
yet this area is so large
one can still feel the grip of loneliness
no matter how large this zone becomes
the empty space still covers it the most
this vast void of empty space
leaves nothing but a lonely mind
thankfully this place is littered with dazzling lights
after all this is our world
our home is nearly a speck of dust
spinning around a larger speck of dust
we look up and see nothing but a sad a and lonely sky
and a question where is the rest
this can't be all there is
this very thought inspires the mind
the mind makes its own worlds
is this a curse or a dream
we can't not see so therefore me make
maybe just forget everything
is so far away from our grasp.
Moose Of Mibu @moose_of_mibu
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Moose Of Mibu @moose_of_mibu
White Flowers:
My head hurts with the thought
Where it came from I know not
-With these flowers where you lie
I couldn't even say goodbye
Petals of white came down with rain
As it poured, so did my pain
And I denied it until now...
Got to conquer this-but I don't know how
Where these thorns of white die and grow
You'll rest with me-forever so!
In my heart of hearts you will remain
As it poured, so did my pain
When you died-so did I
Now my soul remains where these white flowers lie...
Sorry to leave you--I want to see the world
These Autumn leaves crunch under my feet
Breathing-burdensome down the street
With a white flower pressed against my hand
The answer to my problems is just ahead
And i'll struggle-relentless in this troubled land
Until I come to understand-
-This motivation pushing me forward
It's my life Im heading toward
Today is where I say goodbye
To my best friend where these white flowers lie
I leave these white flowers by your side
One day I swear you'll wear them with pride
My imagination is no longer held down by your death
I will make your name known with my every breath!
dragonrage @dragonrage
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dragonrage @dragonrage
Loved You
Like summer's cool rain
Happy thoughts show in my brain
Loved you like the simple joys
Loved you like rain's noise
Flowing as the breeze on my face
Glazing at the twinkling in space
Loved you like the simple life
Loved you happy and away from strife
Though love was past tense
Nothing compares to you from here hence
Animekid @animekid
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Animekid @animekid
Darkness
We all have darkness we try to hide
Darkness that’s hidden deep down inside
We do our best to hide from one another
We do our best to try and smother
But it gets free, it never stays
It spreads to others to our dismay
But in the end light will fight dark’s might
And we will see who wins this morrow’s night
Moose Of Mibu @moose_of_mibu
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Moose Of Mibu @moose_of_mibu
The Ocean
The salt of the sea, stinging me endlessly
Flowing from the serene, everything that can be seen
Like my strong will, all was still, until this somber truth I found
Echoes crashed, clashed with violent waves of sound
The image it forms, created by manic storms
Washed up on the shore, just like every time before
A cast in the sand, molded by your hand
I dig into the form before it sets
I claw and I cut into all its regrets
Until all is dissolved into grains, until nothing remains
Lost in one dream, like reality it slowly seems
Drowning in this, there is no bliss
A one-sided devotion; You are like the ocean
A distant, cold and frigid view
-Can only be a single shade of blue
For I can never have you...
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yaasshat @yaasshat
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yaasshat @yaasshat
The only criticism is this, make sure that youre not saying these things too soon. Its rather heavy in intention, other wise best of luck. Personally, i wouldnt ask another if my words should change, let your words come from you even if sappy.
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yaasshat @yaasshat
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yaasshat @yaasshat
Glad to hear.:)
Animekid @animekid
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Animekid @animekid
Resurrect
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