Heaven's Crossing (Working Title)
silverokumura @silverokumura
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Kinto was a younger boy with turquoise hair and red eyes, he had extremely large throwing stars strapped to his back along with a huge sword with large crystal fragments sticking out the sides, he had human-like ears except they were pointed which struck Salie as an oddity. His clothes were red and similar to the clothes Salie had seen on Ciara, Trinla’s ninja bodyguard so he took a guess that he was a ninja.
“Now that you’ve met everyone we should get to work. Kuzo, what have you got?” Mikuro said turning to his daughter.
“Right well there is word of a bandit raid forming to the west, we should probably nip that in the bud before they can attack the village. The others have been dispatched to address an ‘issue’ further to the west.” Kuzo reported.
“Are you ok with helping us break up the bandit raid camp?” Mikuro asked Salie.
“Of course I am! We cannot let them attack the village!” Salie said eager to get there and stop this heinous attack plan.
“Ok, then let us go.” Mikuro said.
CrownCross @alucard317
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CrownCross @alucard317
Wow. How long have you been writing this ?
silverokumura @silverokumura
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silverokumura @silverokumura
Been working on it a few years actually. Just started posting it.
CrownCross @alucard317
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Heaven's Crossing (Working Title)
CrownCross @alucard317
Wow just Wow
silverokumura @silverokumura
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Heaven's Crossing (Working Title)
silverokumura @silverokumura
I've got three parts for it so far
CrownCross @alucard317
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Heaven's Crossing (Working Title)
CrownCross @alucard317
Nice
silverokumura @silverokumura
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Heaven's Crossing (Working Title)
silverokumura @silverokumura
Please rate and would you like the next part after this?
CrownCross @alucard317
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CrownCross @alucard317
How do I rate it. Ad yes I would if it's not to much trouble.
silverokumura @silverokumura
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silverokumura @silverokumura
scale of 1 to 10 if u please
CrownCross @alucard317
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CrownCross @alucard317
I would say 9.5
So far
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