Black Freesia
- @machina
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Black Freesia
- @machina
You had me that's true
but now I'll fight back
This world isn't evil
it's just been dyed black!
I'll take your evil plan
before it's ecclesia
and I'll turn it to good
Your own evil, Black Freesia.
- @machina
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Black Freesia
- @machina
Bumpity bump.
Lamby @momoichi
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Black Freesia
Lamby @momoichi
very good o.o
- @machina
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Black Freesia
- @machina
Thanks so much ^^ Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Any advice? :3
Lamby @momoichi
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Black Freesia
Lamby @momoichi
none XD! u picked ryhming which in my mind is the only kind of readable poems, u ryhmed well, u had a continues story, a nice ending
u sir, r a poet :P!
- @machina
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Black Freesia
- @machina
Wow Thanks *u*
- @machina
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Black Freesia
- @machina
Wow Thanks *u*
- @machina
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Black Freesia
- @machina
Bumpity bump
Lamby @momoichi
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Black Freesia
Lamby @momoichi
xD did u ever think of makin a profession out of ur poems?
- @machina
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Black Freesia
- @machina
Never! Twas a one time thing.
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