MY ULTIMATE ART!

I appreciate what saphire is saying, but I was trying to capture the feel of the Slender video game (hence the flashlight) If you haven't played the game I can see why it would look to dark.

I have played the game. But you don't want your shadows to blend in with your lining. In art you need a background,middleground, and a foreground if you make it all one shade it will not give it detail and it makes it look like just a background with no life.