That's, I'm starting my manga.

Here goes pages 5 and 6: http://fav.me/d8h8zln http://fav.me/d8h8zmh

From now on I'll try to add more details to the backgrounds and stuff... I'm slowly getting a better understanding of the process.

I read through all the of these comments, and not trying to defend Dalton and lanalesty but it doesn't seem like they are trying to be condesending (Dalton just kinda sounds like it) or rude or trying to insult you etc. If I am seeing what they are seeing, you already have a great start and I can see a lot of potential. I understand you want to do it only for fun and such but I can see so much that happen in the story and the art and the anticipation is getting to us. At least I think that everyone else thinks, too. Idk really. Again, you are doing great. I understand you don't want to be critiqued and we should respect that. I get beaten in critiques all the time by my professors and classmates but it just gives me a fire in my belly, want to do better work. But the only reason why is because i don't wanna do art just as a hobby. Since you do, I am glad. More people should do something creative if they aren't in a "creative field." So that really is awesome.

Yeah, maybe I went full defense mode a tad too early. But I know neither of them was trying to be insulting. It's just that Dalton has a way of putting things that tends to rub me the wrong way.