That's, I'm starting my manga.

Key @key17
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That's, I'm starting my manga.
Key @key17
Just though I'd share the first page of my manga.
I made it today, it's very crude and there's nothing exciting going on, but it's gonna be a sad story, I want it to look barren, and I'm no good with backgrounds and effects anyways.

Key @key17
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Key @key17
http://postimg.org/image/3saznn77f/full/

Dalton_Dark Prince @dalton
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Dalton_Dark Prince @dalton
Youll never get better if you don't try o:

Key @key17
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Key @key17
Why must you insist on putting me down Dalton smh. I'm not good and I know that, I don't need you being so condescendant towards me all the time.

Lily O'Malley @lilyomalley
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Lily O'Malley @lilyomalley
I don't think he's being condescending per say. Depends on how you look at it. He never said your art was bad, so don't pick on yourself thinking that's what he said.
You will get better the more you draw, so if anything, take his words as advice to draw more and continue on with your manga. ^^

Amrod @amrodcalanor
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Amrod @amrodcalanor
Lols, GG

Key @key17
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Key @key17
I'm not so weak that I'd think that. Note that I said insist, implying that this is not the first time.

etherealforest @etherealforest
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etherealforest @etherealforest
It's a promising start - you certainly capture facial emotion really well.

applecaeks @applecaeks
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applecaeks @applecaeks
BTW, pick up some Scott McCloud books to supplement your journey. I'm looking forward to seeing more pages.
Also feel free to message me if you want more serious critique.
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