I blame Yu.

Thanks for dropping by and thanks for the compliment/input. If you would like I could let you know when I add another one. I believe I only have 2 left.

After writing this one I've still yet to go back and finalize it so there are still some area's where a different word or phrase might have been better and as I look at it some more I'm thinking of more corrections I could take care of or changes I could make but I will put it up here as I have written it, for the most part at least. If anybody has any feedback or suggestions go right ahead :) Humans Humans want what they do not own Humans want whatever they loan Humans want whatever they lack They always conjure a reason for their attack (^ Humans?) Humans want what others strive for Humans want what others die for Humans want what they lack That is the reason they plan their attack (^ for their attack? ^) They always want what they do not strive for They always want what they have not the drive for That's their malformed reason for their attack That's the reason as humans we always look back

Perhaps you could change Humans to "We"? Edit: Or maybe "They"? At least if you're going for something that is thought provoking about what the subject is and/or the subject itself that may be a good idea

Thanks for stopping by again ^-^ Hm, If I change "Humans" to "We" it doesn't sound quite as the same unless I also change some of the rest of each line as well but as I'm reading the poem again it's all flowing very easily. That might be a very good suggestion thank you ^_^ I think it also helps fix some iffy parts I was stuck wondering on about whether to change or not.

This is the final poem I have to post. It is also my favorite poem that I have written. Death, love, and waiting. Death will come for you as Death came for me And I'll stand right by his side watching you with glee Watching you twist and turn and take your final breath Looking so beautiful in the face of Death Ambivalence is surly the thing that my face now shows I'm so happy now to see you die But saddended to see you go You look so peaceful now not knowing that your about to go When Death comes to take you theres a hissing of the ground For every step Death takes he leaves blackened ground in his wake Soon it will be over and soon it will begin And it will be just you and me with an eternity to spend So many years I've waited, hoping at Death's Gate To hear you call my name, to see your beautiful face So long I've waited to see those eyes, those beautiful daybreak eyes The pain I felt for every morrow that I was not at your side So many years he was the only one on which I could depend To bring happiness into my life once and for all again Now graciously Death has helped me become one and whole again I am forever indebted to him, he was the one in which I could truly depend And as I see her leave her bed and appear right by my side I stare into those beautiful daybreak colored eyes She says my name and lifts her hand to brush across my cheek I was so happy then that suddenly my legs grew weak And all the years I spent waiting for her seemed only but a week